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Zerenner's avatar

Nice job revealing his background at the end and resolving these questions of why he's in this predicament.

Good start with a buzzing pest to symbolize the anxious burden he lives with, of being found.

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Evelyn Griffith's avatar

Thank you so much! I appreciate your thoughtful read through!

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Ankica's avatar

Beautifully written! 💕

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